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Updated: 9/27/2021
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  • Concerning your thesis statement, don't forget it ought to have a clear focus, purpose and topic. In your case, your position isn't clear, so I suggest to state it.
  • This would make your thesis much stronger!
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  • Thank you so much for your advice!Have a nice day!
  • We both hope you find these tips helpful for your future tasks. Have a lovely day!