Hi I am Noah H from Oakdale Middle School sixth grade. Thank you for taking your time to consider my updates to the exterior of Massanutten WaterPark. This could be done by adding a sign for the park, a sign for the resort, a paint job on the slides and exterior to make the place pop (though not too much), and you can make the parking lot bigger.
The update I think you should consider is renovating the exterior and area around the park. For one I think you should add a sign with your logo at the entry to the parking lot. You can also add a sign that points to the resort advertising lodging. You can also do a paint job on the exterior walls and slides to make them pop, but with the rustic feel you’re going for. Lastly you can make the parking areas bigger or add new ones.
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The larger parking lot would benefit you by making room for more guests, which means more money. The sign leading to the resort would benefit you by having people spend more money at the resort and come back the next day. And the paint job would have a feel that’s warm and comfortable and makes people want to come. The sign for the park would make the place feel fun and kid friendly.
These updates are what you need to increases your appeal. The park sign is unique because the park symbol is like none other. Also most parks don’t go for a soft rustic feel. Thus making the paint job unique. Most parks don’t have a resort to go with it so the sign would advertise the exclusive resort. Most parks always run out of room in the parking lots and I bet you do too. If you enlarge the parking lot that won’t be a problem any more.
These updates will also benefit the community. Because if you have more customers some local organizations might also get tourists as well, thus helping the community. Many people will also eat at local restaurants and then come back which helps the restaurant and you.
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