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A Brother's Revenge

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  • This is amazing, Dorena!
  • Thanks!
  • I'm running late...
  • We have to go.
  • INT. – KITCHEN – MORNINGJEFFREY (18) and DORENA (14) is almost done eating their breakfast at the dining table.
  • . .
  • I'll be home late today.
  • INTERCUT: HALLWAYTheir father, KALI (42), got out of his room out into the hallway.
  • Bye dad!
  • Enjoy your day, kids!
  • INT. – KITCHEN – MORNINGKali told Jeffrey and Dorena that they have to go because he is late to work.
  • Flowchart Symbols
  • The diamond represents a decision.
  • INTERCUT: KITCHEN COUNTER Dorena grabbed her id on the kitchen counter and Kali grabbed the car keys almost simultaneously.
  • Finally...
  • Class dismissed.
  • INT. – CAR (MOVING) – MORNINGKali is driving a little faster than normal. Jeffrey is on his phone and Dorena is looking outside the window of the car.
  • ...
  • Are you okay?
  • What's going on over there?
  • EXT. SCHOOL GROUNDS - MORNINGThey arrive at the school.
  • INT. – CAR (STATIONARY) – MORNINGDorena told her dad that she'll be home late today because she has after-school practice.
  • Someone grabbed my butt.
  • What does he look like?
  • EXT. SCHOOL GROUNDS - MORNINGJeffrey and Dorena got out of the car and said goodbye to their dad.
  • I remember his face.
  • Let me handle this.
  • INT. - CLASSROOM - MORNINGJeffrey is in his class listening to his teacher.
  • INT. - CLASSROOM - MORNINGThe teacher dismisses Jeffrey's class.
  • INT. – SCHOOL HALLWAY - MORNINGJeffrey got out of his classroom and he notices a commotion at the end of the hallway.
  • INT. – SCHOOL HALLWAY - MORNINGJeffrey got closer and saw that Dorena is crying which is the cause of the commotion.
  • Dorena!!!
  • INT. – SCHOOL HALLWAY - MORNINGJeffrey asked Dorena about what happened and she told him that a fellow student grabbed her butt.
  • INT. – SCHOOL HALLWAY - MORNINGDorena told Jeffrey that she remembers his face. Jeffrey reassured Dorena that he will handle the situation.
  • EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONThe final bell rang and students started coming out. Jeffrey and Dorena waited for the culprit to come out.
  • Point him to me if you see him.
  • EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONJeffrey and Dorena waited and waited, but the culprit was nowhere to be found.
  • Looks like he's not coming out...
  • EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONJeffrey and Dorena waited and waited, but the culprit was nowhere to be found.
  • There he is!!!
  • EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONJeffrey started sprinting towards him with no hesitation. He caught the culprit off-guard and smashed his bag on the side of the culprit’s head.
  • I'm sorry!
  • Apologize to my sister!
  • That's enough...
  • LOL
  • Ding Dong
  • There's been a change of plans.
  • Hey kiddo! I thought you'll be home late today?
  • EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONThe culprit was stunned and fell to the ground. Jeffrey then proceeded to kick him everywhere until he could not stand anymore. Dorena approached Jeffrey and stopped him.
  • Hey bud. How was your day? Did anything interesting happen in school today?
  • EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS OUTISDE THE EXIT - AFTERNOONJeffrey grabbed Dorena’s hand and just left the culprit lying on the ground.
  • EXT. – SCHOOL GROUNDS - BUS STOP - AFTERNOONThe school bus just arrived and they rode it back home.
  • INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGJeffrey is watching TV in the living room.
  • Nothing interesting happened at all.
  • INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGDorena is preparing dinner in the kitchen and she hears their doorbell ring.
  • Is that so? Well let's go eat. Dorena prepared our dinner.
  • INT. – HALLWAY - EVENINGKali just got home and was surprised that Dorena was there since she told him that she'll be home late.
  • Wow! It's even better than our breakfast!
  • Oh, stop.
  • INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGJeffrey is watching TV in the living room.
  • INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGJeffrey turned around unsure of his reply.
  • INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGDorena winks at Jeffrey, signaling to not tell their father about the incident.
  • INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGJeffrey got the message and told Kali that nothing interesting happened.
  • INT. – LIVING ROOM - EVENINGJeffrey is watching TV in the living room.
  • INT. – KITCHEN – MORNINGThe family ate their dinner after a very long day for all of them.
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