Work Problem
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- Libisema: 1
- oh hey Tom! did you see the email I sent you?
- yes I did but that's not why I'm here. Your emails was...interesting it was unprofessional
- Unprofessional? How so? and if it is can you help me fix it?
- Sure! I'd be happy to help a friend out! First let's take a look at that email and help your professional communication better.
- Libisema: 2
- To:Tom1234@gmail.com
- YOOOOOOO Tom my man! u know where 2 go 2 the meeting? And do u know what time it starts? cuz if ya do let me know, I'd really appreciate it thanks man!
- alright lets look at the tone, workplace etiquette, and communication. The first thing I already see is the tone of the email, its unprofessional and looks like your not taking anything seriously. Secondly, your using "text slang" which is a big no when writing an email.
- Alright here's the email I sent you.
- I see, what should I do instead?
- Libisema: 3
- Dear Tom, Do you happen to know where our meeting is going to happen as well as what time its going to be held? If so please inform me. I'd appreciate it very much, Thank you.
- Bob
- Something like this! It's professional and professional!
- I think I get it now. Thanks for helping me Tom! I'll write my emails better thanks to you!
- Tom
- Not a problem, I'm glad I could help Bob! oh and before I forget I was going to ask if you wanted to grab lunch with me?
- Definitely! Lead the way!