The Button 2

The things I changed in this story was the amount of money that was offered by Mr.Stewart. The reason why I increased the money was that it would make it harder for the reader to think about it and say no. Another thing that I changed was the name of "Norma" instead I changed it to Nadia I thought Nadia was a nice and cuter name. I also made "Stewart" a little nicer and make sound a little less than a scam. This is important to make the readers think that the story will end well but it didn't.