Friendly Review (What not to do)

Show that you value the reviewer's time. Be present and punctual for the scheduled virtual meeting, prepared to summarize your work and discuss 1-2 focus areas.
The LR: TMP Friendly Review: What NOT To Do - Authors
Hey! I'm so sorry again that I didn't show up for our meeting the other day, I totally forgot we were doing this. So, you're just going to read it and tell me how to make it better? Is that how this goes? I just want general feedback... Just tell me what you think...
Be prepared. You get one review and your reviewer can't give proper feedback on an incomplete draft.
I haven't quite finished my paper... It's mostly done, I just haven't written out all of my literature review yet. So, I was thinking, could you just start looking at it and I can just get feedback on this draft? And then, I could send it to you again for more feedback in a few weeks when I've had a chance to finish it. What do you think?
Remember to decide on JUST 1-2 critical areas of focus within your work for feedback from an expert in the field.
I'd like feedback on the title and the abstract. I'd also like for you to help me figure out a better way to display this data. It would be great if we could, maybe, figure out a way to rearrange my literature review and then bulk up my discussion section. And, finally, if you could just spend some time proofreading the whole draft, that'd be really great.