hey, can you help me please?, I have an essay but I don't know if it is correct, can you read it and tell me how's it? It is about Auschwitz, it was a scary place, where the happiness don't exist, there the people suffer and especially the Jews.
So like I was telling to you Auschwitz was a bad place to be there, there was the Nazi's time, they were able to have control of a lot of countries already, they construct a lot of concentration camps but Auschwitz was the biggest one, there the soldiers were able to experiment with the Jews people, and also they kill them.
Wow, this is so interesting, so, Auschwitz was the last place you want to be if you were Jews. It scares me just thinking about what could happen to me if I were in the shoes of one of so many Jews
In the end not everything was bad, when the allies arrived they managed to save the lives of many Jews in Auschwitz, although many died, in the end the terrible massacre in Auschwitz finally ended, and there is even a museum on this place