CAUSE: Since the boy worked alone he created chalk board drawings and writings which were hard to see normal unless in photo. These boys work 9-10 hours every day (Freedman, 51).
Text Structure-Cause and Effect
" While I was there, two breaker boys fell or were carried into the coal chute, where they were smothered to death,"(48).
Kids At Work
Mindset- Ignores negative feedback
complex Sentence: Since the kids worked in a glass factory, they were often hurt and put in difficult situations.
Infinitive sentence: To achieve money is what kids strive to achieve, but with tough jobs it was harder than it seemed.
SWBS- Kids wanted to make money and have time to enjoy being a kid, but there jobs took up 9-10 hours and made them very weak and tired. So they kept working until Lewis Hine made a difference.
EFFECT: " 'A lonely job,' wrote Hine, 'by himself nine or ten hours a day in absolute darkness save for his little oil lamp.'.. These drawings tell the tale of the boys loneliness underground" (Freedman, 49,51).
This person was quoted because it shows the readers how dangerous kids jobs were and how they could get killed in the coal mine.
How do you think kids being forced to work is similar to the Great Depression?
Participle Phrase: Struggling to stay awake in the glass factory, kids died because of such horrible and unhealthy conditions.
Explain five topics : Kindness, bravery, cooperative, caring, and perseverance.
If/Then- If Lewis Hine didn't photograph the children doing tough jobs, then it probably would of taken people a long time to realize what was happening during society.