monkeys paw
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- MADE BY ISAIAH TILLMAN
- here in this scene the military guy goes up to the house and gives them the monkeys pawhere i would add a sunset and not just have it dark and creepy out of nowhere. so then it can lead people to watch the film with creepy music in the background.
- I would make this have more thrill in the film and the book doesn't show any detail doesn't make it scary enough so here i would give more detail on how he died and some more lighting to scare the reader even more then just getting crushed.
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- as he wishes for the pounds there should have been some cool effects like the house spins in circles and we pass out so that's what i would add
- as she begs for the father to bring back there son the father tries to convince her not to but yet he still wishes for there son backhere i would add some crazy light affects and make the whole house shake as soon as he wishes for there kid back
- here i wouldn't really change anything the filmmaker did a really good job with the load banging on the door as the wife runs down the stares the only think i would have changed was the father should have tripped running up the stairs to get the monkeys paw
- here i also like how they went far to close as they die it scares the reader as there also in shocked how the ending ends. one thing i would change tho was it should have gave him his own gravestone with his kid and wife not just on top
- RIP
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