In this scene I would have slowly quieted the diagetic sound, which would the slowly lead into the next part of this scene. i would also focus on Chris to show that he is nervous
in this scene it shows that Chris is nervous to be in his boss's office and that he has no idea whats going on. if i was going to change this i would have shown the camera so that we can see the boss's reaction to how nervous Chris is
In this scene the boss has just offered Chris a job offer and he is very happy with the decision that he has made. i would change this scene by doing a wide shot and showing the other people in the room. this would then show the viewer that they are are making a good decision.
In this scene it shows Chris's reaction to him getting hired. i would change this scene by adding in a quiet happy music which would then lead into the next scene
In this scene i would highlight Chris being happy and running down the street. i would the have the camera follow him running down the street to get his son.
In this scene i would slowly drain the diagetic sounds so that the only thing we are focused on is Chris hugging his kid. i would also zoom in on him hugging so that you can see their faces