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- This is what you came up with all the time you had. Seriously?!
- I went on a walk. I sat on a bench at the park. It rained there. I went home and slept.
- It's good! This is what I did yesterday. What's the problem.
- ...
- *astonished*
- IM SORRY PLEASE!!!
- :'(
- So basically you aren't using any voice in your work. And before you run your mouth, voice shows when readers experience their viewpoint, experiences, and perspective. When you write you want to use your own voice. Be unique!
- Precisely. NOW REWRITE THIS ABOMINATION!
- OHHH. So your saying that my paragraph was so basic and bland you wanted to gouge your eyes out.
- Many minutes later...
- Yesterday evening I decided to do something with my miserable life. I haven't touched grass in a while so I thought to go outside and enjoy what little life I had. On my walk around the neighborhood the trees swayed and danced to the bird's beautiful melodies. It was the refreshing start I needed to life, to breath, to enjoy everything around me. During my stroll I saw the local neighborhood park. Many children and their parents were there, I despise children. But I am not going to let little Satan spawns ruin my day. Once I entered leavey area of the park I saw a beautiful bench. The bench was sitting alone in the shade. The perfect spot to enjoy this hot summer day. I made my way to the bench and sat down. This was the best. I took out my phone and sat there for hours doing whatever it is I do on my phone during this hour. A drop of water landed on my head, at first I thought it was a slobbering child but it was the sky weeping. I put my phone back in my pocket and started heading back to my house. The rain started to drop a bit faster by the minute, but I managed to beat it to my house. I took of my shoes and went upstairs to my room. I laid down on my bed in silence.I should go out more, I thought to myself as I slowly drifted to sleep.
- Oh my! Th-t-this is worthy of god's blessed hands type of work!
- LET'S PARTYY!!!
- GIRLLLL I almost forgot today was my birthday!
- I know, I'm literally a genius. But thanks I can finally ace my tests with my new voice skills!!
- You're right! Me too!
- :)
- THE END
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