Melanie sat in her booth not paying attention to the teacher machine.She closed her eyes and started daydreaming about flamingos and how their feathers were so red that they looked like they were on fire. Melanie called them firebirds.
FALLING ACTION
Melanie wondered if they could take her to Natural it was the last place on earth where birds lived. Her parents half promies to take her on christmas break.
RESOLUTION
When melanie got to the park she darted into the woods and she ran far into the woods until she saw a flamingo and she did and it was across the lake so she darted into the water and her dad saw her and said : Melanie, get out of there!. She touch the flamingo and it fell over and then she notice it was never real and she started crying.
THEME
Melanie's father order to come and he said Melanie come out now! and then the caretaker told Melanie and her father why they had no real flamingos in the park and he kept talking faster than a cheetah. He mentioned that the water was poisoned and melanie jump in so she problly got sick and died.
Melanie is mature and accepted her dram being runied
My society is more messed up than my bully becuase of all the pollution in my world and the over population I cant even go outside with having to wear a mask and goggels.