Double Meanings
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- summer we prayed, end of summer youth retreat, church, then club-32 self conscious about it, Rachel jealous
- arrive at hotel, Dave and Busters, let down with Quincy, Jurassic Park, back to the hotel, brush off Neta, upstairs to discuss last Thursday-trampoline
- Once when we were young and on the brink of something crazy beautiful and suffocatingly sad
- maybe cryptic tense convo between 32 and Rachel about it--just happened 32 said, Rachel how could you let it--that wasn't right--tries to pull the religion card on her-example in the world...
- movie foot scene
- Neta comes up for pillow fight, downstairs for pizza, back upstairs to wrestle
- you're going to get hurt-protective hold-girls in van on way to Atlanta
- Busch Gardens-how we became friends, this horrible argument use new written scene for when they make up
- add convo between 32 and Neta where she's starting to create pressure
- next day, festival, Javier, Quincy, drive back Rachel's excited
- detour to Home Country Buffet-tension between Rachel and 32, meet some of the girl group, looking forward to Atlanta, looking back at Prince and Princess December banquet
- w Rachel Neta tries to tell her she is having feelings too but Rachel sees it as a ploy to get her attention, that she's trying to find a way in, she tells 32?convo where they talk about things not getting in the way
- throughout, Rachel tries to profess her love and 32 doesn't help her say what she wants--love you like a sister, wasn't going to paint a picture--she was clear cut until time to profess whatever she was trying to say and 32 is afraid she's trying to judge her, she's afraid Rachel's spirituality will overwhelm things between them, that Rachel is trying to tell her it's too tempting and now they can't be friends, it's also that she wants Rachel to take ownership if she is professing her love, its hard but where can they go if Rachel can't even be honest with her about it
- 32 calls the morning of-you want to go to school together-oh I'm running behind I'll just meet you there
- Rachel gets Neta to stay for the movie even though 32 wanted her to go; awk moment before bed, 32 undressing
- Rachel resolves things have to be different at school-Neta will be watching, how does she tell 32 they can't? she has to and she's got to stay away somehow-plans ruined
- at church? Neta confronts Rachel and tells her she knows something is going on-Rachel denies it Neta doesn't believe her says they need to come forward and get prayerwe all make mistakes and don't fight it alone
- Night before school 32 is so excited, basketball, friends, Rachel--wondering what this year will be like now that she and Rachel are getting together
- once they get there, Rachel is kinda standoffish-32 figured she'd be a lttie more open at school rather than at church-nothing too overt-we know how ppl look at gays even when it's getting more progressive
- revamp scene where Rachel gets call from Mrs. Del--she is even looking at a different school for 32, scene with Randy will have to go in another story probably or maybe on the tennis team Rachel joins a girl stays later and keeps having sex in the showers, Rachel is one of the last ones there because she doesn't like to change in front of anyone and the private showers are too dingy...
- so Rachel starts coming over more, PowderPuff, Applebee's the talk about college and being on their own
- 32 slapping peoples hands that she knows from basketball and volleyball, yeah I go here now, Rachel wishing she could enjoy the moment but she's on the lookout for Neta
- convo with mrs delconvo with Rachel's motherneta scene
- in Rachel's head about how things are going
- 32's disappointment with dad, coming out all on her own, the pressure of the prayer meeting
- Grant, youth alive, intro of Danielle, Jade
- Grant/Danielle
- prayer meeting, 32 and Rachel pray
- Underworld movie-growing apart Rachel debates telling her about Neta and why she backed away to protect both of them-Neta knows if she tells MRs. Del she will keep them apart, make 32 quit the team for good she'd already talked to the pastors about it and def make her quit rotcRachels dad didn't even like having a gay waiter; he'd pulled her brother out of class because the teacher was gay-but she'd judged 32 too, tried to change her because it would be easier-now 32 was resenting her too
- 32: Danielle is my friend
- exams-Christmas-learned of letters between her and DanielleRachel tries to talk to her about school fix the distance--becomes testy between them
- Rachel sends truce text to 32-accepted
- seeing her at the basketball game
- things getting testy at Mrs. Del's house, Neta wagging her tongue about shame on 32 and Rachel better stay away from her, meanwhile she sidles up to 32 like nothing happened
- Rachel trying to put the relationship in context-maybe just practice for 32
- 32: father not a dad;mother had tainted her and Rachel
- Rachel doesn't want to be part of the problem when 32 gets right
- Ch 15 32's first time with DanielleCh 16 Danielle and 32 disintegrating Ch 17 32 and Rachel hanging out and she tells her she's reconnected with LinetteThen in bed
- Add Rachel worried she's getting sloppy, can't let this happen give Neta a chance to go to the pastorsCh 18 32 and Danielle talking about discovery by their parentsCh 1932 decides to go join Rachel in cape cod bible study groupthey make out, Rachel ends it, 32 upsetCh 20 32 thinking about Rachel and God and how she was torn too
- Ch 14 basketballMeet cute DanielleTheir romance developing May need intervening scene with Rachel
- Ppl treating her like she's evilThen in 32's pov we learn she's crying because of how she's stilted Crying out to a God that would let this happen
- ch 21Jade 32's first timeCh 22School parking lot lighter
- They get together(Should this go here)Flashback to how 32 and her talk to each other
- Ch 23 convo with Mrs del and flashback to 32 in prayer meeting. The churchHow she and 32 had seen gay ppl before
- Ch 25 altarRachel Recommits away from 32Thinking 32 is a shadow but upset at herself too for caving to Neta and everyone elseCh 26 in class
- You don't know-after 32s game
- ch 27 ClassThey're not speakingDisenchanted w faith and her choice
- Neta getting married right after high school bridal shower
- Ch 28 An uneasy truce when they head to friends going away party with neta Add scene?The party with Ryan and Dawn and LisaThe fight they have
- Onion rings: 32 jealous dreams poems
- Ch 29 father wants to know why she did itWeeping in her room
- Visit with calia in TexasBattleship chapter
- 32 trying to recover connects with Desi
- Rachel feeling disenchantedTake our Leon chapter just include the reminisce and sleepoverAdd scene where Rachel confronts Neta why are you doing this
- Memory lane Italian restaurant together when Rachel gets back
- Kiss but both disturbedTalk in parking Lot Kisses don't count
- Neta outs her to the youth group but Rachel's already made her mind up and told 32 more than words this time I'm going to take actionNot going to let you do thisRework chapter about her being with someone with kidsUse in Quincy story
- Terse truce with NetaPick up with coming out chaptersJavier takes it wellAnother friend of there's Asia is the one they're cooking with and talking
- Rachel's historyLooking back girls she crushed on in kindergarten boys tooPlaying House with girls and boys
- prom proposalUse the second part hereGiving her prom proposal and a trip to Orlando disneyworld for grad night just the two of them this time
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