Lost Crying

Lost Crying

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Storyboard Description

Two young girls have a horrifying experience when a sleepover goes wrong.

Storyboard Text

  • Two girls having a normal sleepover. They decide to tell the scary myth about 'Susannah and her lost baby'.
  • Scary Story...Blah Blah Blah.
  • They wake up to the sound of a baby crying in the middle of the night.
  • Do You hear that? It's..it's a baby?!
  • Let's go look.
  • This way!
  • Girls follow the sounds of the crying. It's growing louder and louder.
  • it's here at the Levee!
  • Did you hear that splash?
  • They hear footsteps rapidly running towards them from the left, as they are looking at the water.
  • The girls look to the left. Girls POV. There is nobody where footsteps are coming from.
  • Let's get out of here!
  • Wide shot of girls running way from levee. (Not just standing like they are here.)
  • Alexis runs and doesn't hear Carly fall down.
  • Over the shoulder shot of Carly. She is on the ground and as she struggls to get up in her fear, whispersw begin to circle.
  • CU zoom of Carly. Impending doom apparent. POV of the attacker. Crying and whispering mixed now.
  • Screen goes black for one second. Confusing audience.
  • CU of Alexis. She turns to realize that Carly is not behind her. Crying and whispering still going on.
  • When we see Carly next she is dangerously close to the water. She is chanting " find her baby." "Wheres the baby?" It's like she is being pulled towards the middle of the water.
  • What are you doing?!
  • Alexis runs in the water to try and save Carly from walking any further.
  • Victoria's baby! She wants me to find it!
  • CARLY!!
  • Carly suddenly snaps out of it when Alexis yells her name. She is confused/panicked.
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