I don't think that is a good idea for such a small child. she'll be atractted to that park like glue
Climax
Come back here Melody!
Shes not suppost to go to the other side!
Melody sat inside the booth, ignoring the machine as she imagined herself playing with flamingos, their feathers seemed to be on fire. she was then called down to her mother, put on her smog mask, and she was on her way
Falling Action
They went extinct ages ago, fools some guest
She then went downstair, her mother was waiting for her. they then went out with their smog masks cutting their way through the fog with their street cruiser. Cutting through it as if it was butter. She was waiting to ask her parents if she could go to the natural park. the only place left with animals
Resolution
we're going home, right now!
after a little budging they finally agreed. When they got to the park her dad and the park ranger were busy talking, too busy to notice when she ran off. then when they caught up she had found a flamingo, Come back here, Melody! her dad had yelled. she decided to touch it as she would never have such an opportunity again. But it turned out the flamingo was a statue and it fell into the water.
Theme/Conflict
The park ranger then explained to Melody's dad that they went extinct years before then but they keep the fake flamingo there to make it seem like they are well and alive.
Melody comes to accept that her dreams are ruined and she will never see a real flamingo in her life. She holds back tears as she picks the flamingo up and places it up right to not ruin anyone elses dreams.
Ok, i'm coming.
Why does the world have to be so overpopulated and poluted?
As the helicopter flew through the clouds, melody said outloud, Why does the world have to be so overpopulated and poluted?