And that's the most memorable experience I had with my family last Summer Vacation, Ma'am.
Yes Ma'am, I had a lot of fun spending my time with my family. My dad tought me a lot about the effects of climate change and many other informations about our environment.
Good job Astrielle! Did you have fun during your vacation?
Well done Astrielle! Now I will grade your story based in relevance, accuracy, bias and reliability.
As for the Relevance, you're on spot, The information that you gave was clear and very useful to people who still doesn't know the Effects about Climate Change. And as for the Accuracy, the information are also correct. They were elaborated well and supported by known verified factors about the Effects of Climate Change.
For the reliability, I'll give it a 4, well, in the story you shared, the majority of the information is trustworthy but not all. Because some of the information is based on experiences right. I'm not saying that it was wrong, but it is good to experienced that, okay.
And finally, for bias/perspective, some informations that you accumulated came from a variety of sources but most of it came from a single source therefore you did great with a score of 4.
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