the last spin
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- Tigo and Danny are meeting each other for the first and last time. To handle conflict discretely between two gangs, Tigo and Danny will play Russian Roulette. One thing I would change in this scene is how tense Danny comes off to be. Tigo is trying to make small talk but Danny is barely engaging.
- This is a good piece, it runs for 45 bucks, if you try to buy it in the store. That's a lot go money
- Let's get on with it.
- I'll go first. I'm giving you a break.
- In this scene, Tigo decides he will start the game to give Danny a break, but Danny seems skeptical. Tigo ultimately ends up going first and the firing pin clicked on an empty chamber. A thing I would change is the way Tigo is unfazed.
- What the hell's the difference?
- why are you giving me a break?
- By this scene, Tigo and Danny have had small conversation about how they both admired they gun and potentially wanted to join the army but their mothers were very old fashion because they are were both from the "old country." Danny takes his spin nervously but he also pulled an empty chamber. He quickly put the gun down on the table.
- Makes you sweat doesn't it?
- I better spin
- Tigo and Danny start to joke around about how Russian roulette is close to a workout because of the way it makes you sweat. They converse about their girlfriends and then Tigo takes his turn. He pulled an empty chamber. Then Danny took his turn after they slipped in the second cartridge. He also pulls and empty chamber.
- You got courage Danny.
- You're the one who needs the courage... It's your spin.
- They continue to converse between turns, and Danny stops Tigo before he pulls the trigger. It is as if he wanted to say something but couldn't. A thing I would change is that he would've just said how he felt. But again Tigo pulled an empty chamber. They make it to the third chamber and talk about row boating. After a couple spins and continuous empty chambers they decide to make plans to go row boating together with their girlfriends.
- Yeah, one boat. Hey your girl'll like Juana, I mean it. She's a swell chick.
- Look, you want to go to the lake this Sunday? I mean with your girl and mine? We could get 2 boats. Or even one if you want.
- Here's to Sunday.
- Danny took the last spin and said "Here's to Sunday." He was smiling and Tigo gave him a smile back. He put the gun to his head and pulled the trigger. A bullet came out shattering Danny's face and Tigo let out a small cry. A thing I would change is that Tigo let out a bigger cry because it shows he cared. Or even Tigo would've took the gun and shot himself to create a plot twist.
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