ariel revised

Once upon a time there was a princess mermaid named Ariel. Ariel dreamed of land while she was stuck underwater. It all changed one day after a ship was sinking and she saw a man. Ariel also had an amazing voice. She would sing her heart out, and she dreamed of singing to the prince on the land. However, Ariel has a secret, a secret no one knows.

Ariel longed to be on the land. She would watch the prince wander around the land. She wished that she could walk on the sand, and share her voice to the people on the sand

Ursula. Please help me walk on the land. What will it take for you to give me legs?

If you want me to help you you poor unfortanate girl, then I require your voice.

Okay I will

Ursula fulfilled Ariel's request at the cost of her voice. Ariel made it to the land, and Eric encountered a voiceless Ariel.

Woah hello, I'm Eric. Who are you?

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Oh you can't speak. That's okay

This is my castle. Feel free to ask anyone for help. I am around if you need anything. I'm sorry you can't speak.

Ursula now had Ariel's voice. She was ecstatic to finally have Ariel's lovely singing voice. However, now that Ariel was happy on the land, her plan to go steal the prince from her with the singing was now set into motion.

Once upon a time there was a princess mermaid named Ariel. Ariel dreamed of land while she was stuck underwater. It all changed one day after a ship was sinking and she saw a man. Ariel also had an amazing voice. She would sing her heart out, and she dreamed of singing to the prince on the land. However, Ariel has a secret, a secret no one knows.